2 different age puppies playing advice please

https://i.ytimg.com/vi_webp/GQrk9qhKTaE/mqdefault.webp  Hya i hope ive done this right ive recorded my 2 pups playing in jst wud like some advice or feedback about what people think about the way they play

I can't view on my iPad otherwise I would take a look Donna.

clicking on that link sends a 2kb file to my downloads folder ..
now't else ..

This link doesn't work.

Try uploading to photobucket or YouTube and repost the link Donna

hya everyone that tried to view my video i'll try uploading it again

https://s908.photobucket.com/user/donna_flowers2/media/VID_20151008_120758_zpsmzrkbuqe.mp4.html
hya everyone i've tried to upload my video again im hoping it works this time

Yup that clip worked just fine

So I guess your concern is the rough play, Staffies play rough and an make an awful noise too whilst playing, it's normal.

What you will need to do is seperate them if you think it's getting Too rough. Don't yell at them as this can heighten the situation but train a command like "Time" in a loud firm voice and then seperate so that they get the idea and don't forget to reward if they do as asked.

By training this in, you shouldn't have any problems with play that gets out if hand

This looks like perfectly normal (LOW energy lol) play

thankyou for having a look its not a very good video of them playing.when you viewed it did u think they were playing ok are not, ive been using the word nicely as you wud ov heard in the video lol and most times times bruno takes notice but tia now as she is getting abit older iz getting abit braver now in dosent hide under the table as much i do have treats on me when they are playing but i keep them for when i try in seperate them which is another bit advice i wud appreciate when i think its getting to rough n i step in i normally seperate them by using the treats to get one into another room to chill is this the right way to do it

They look like playing to me. Always use the phrase you want to use to seperate them before treats so that they associate that phrase with break and reward